The
decaying light stopped casting its shadows inside the guard
aspirants' quarters. It started to rain; big drops pattered on the
stained-glass windows. Caradhar took his time to get to his bed, the
only taken one at the time. He removed his armour piece by piece,
very slowly; then he sat down and unfastened the clasps of his
leather shirt. He looked up, and his gaze got captured by the view of
the rain drumming against the pieces of red, grey and colourless
glass. For a moment, he allowed himself to remember...
***
When
he returned from Ummankor, Caradhar quickly left the group and
discreetly slipped inside his bedroom to hide his loot in a safe
place. He was almost caught in the middle of his task by the sound of
the door, being wide open, and Nestro's figure, leaning against the
jamb, with a half proud, half mocking smile.
'Congratulations,
cadet.
You made it back from Ummankor in one piece; just for the record, I
never doubted, not even for a second. That is, your fencing is
pitiful, but you surely became agile enough to run for your life.'
When he saw his slight frown, the weapon master added, approaching
him: 'You know I'm joking; I take very seriously everything I do. I
wouldn't send you to face danger if I didn't trust your abilities.
And I am very satisfied of what we achieved, you and me,' he said,
with suggestive voice, his hand going deep into the hair that covered
the nape of his neck. 'Maybe we should celebrate it...' he leant,
kissing his neck in that demanding, possessive way of his.
'Maybe
we should.' Caradhar's hand, bolder, sneaked inside the back of
Nestro's breeches.'Now, if you go to the bed and lie on your stomach,
I could start the preparations...'
Nestro's
lips remained still for some seconds on the young elf's neck; then
they released a soft grunt.
'One
of these days you'll make me lose my temper, and I will make you pay
dearly for the audacity of your tongue...' he muttered, with sarcasm.
'But if we are going to play, we better go to my room; it has a
lock.'
'You're
just shivering at the thought of somebody opening that door and
finding Nestro, the weapon master, with his back against someone like
me.'
Nestro
straightened up to stare at the young elf with his deep, dark eyes.
'Yes,
you're right: it would be embarrassing for me if it became public
that a little thing like you gets me on all fours every time he feels
like it; but I also know that many would envy me for having exclusive
right to enjoy that red-haired little thing, so... If that's what you
want, let's go to your bed.
His
eyes and words showed such determination that Caradhar felt a bit
inhibited. Without looking away, he slid the intrusive hand outside
his clothes and said:
'Your
room is better: it has a lock.'
Nestro
smiled widely.
Back
in Argailias, the young elves' mood was optimistic. It was the final
training day and they would swear their oaths of allegiance, wearing
the three-coloured armour. Their cadets uniforms would be worn, for
the last time, during a ceremony chaired by the Maede himself, as a
great honour. When all the cadets were gathered in the hall of arms,
standing at attention, Maede Killien made his entrance, very
self-assured, surrounded by his escort and followed by his spouse.
Her son's gaze followed her with discretion while she walked behind
her husband, took a look around the hall, focused her attention on
Caradhar for a second and then averted her eyes, pretending she had
to fix her sleeves.
The
red-haired elf concentrated then on the Maede, whom he had never seen
before. His figure and bearing didn't strike him, as he had no
special traits, apart from his very fair hair and eyes; but the ones
surrounding him were obviously holding their breath and trying to
satisfy even his most insignificant wishes at once, their watching
faces looking around and then turning back to him with extreme
devotion. The vision of his mother showing such behaviour made him
raise his eyebrows: a consummate actress... or, definitely, something
else, since he could not imagine that Dame Corail possessed such a
submissive personality.
The
Maede walked towards the cadets; he stared at them for a moment and
then spoke.
'Welcome,
young cadets. Your captain spoke favourably of you, in your first
mission; this in spite of the fact that you couldn't satisfy our
Grand Alchemist as well.' He chuckled, his eyes stopping on everyone,
evaluating them. 'I like to form my own opinion, so here I am, coming
to check by myself the kind of material that we have here. But
first... First I want you to kneel before me and swear allegiance, as
proof of your loyalty to House Elore'il.'
As
if moved by an irresistible impulse, all the cadets went down on
their knees. Caradhar, reacting half a second later, imitated his
companions and then bowed his head, biting his lips for being the
only one lagging behind in the perfectly executed choreography.
However, when he dared to glance at them out of the corner of his
eye, couldn't help but notice their blank stares; there was something
unnatural about it.
It
was a traditional part of the ceremony for the future guards to show
their abilities in individual combat. Duelling was not Caradhar's
strong point, but he relaxed when he saw the opponent that chance had
given him: impetuous, predictable, it wouldn't be difficult to feint
leaving an unprotected flank; after his foreseeable attack he would
expose himself, and the rest would be a question of waiting for the
right moment to hit.
Once
the duels were completed, the last part was the long-awaited moment
to wear the House livery. Maede Killien, though, had other plans; he
turned to his spouse and asked, with a devious voice:
'My
darling, let's indulge ourselves in a bit more of entertainment. Did
any of our young elves catch your interest?' Much to Caradhar's
dismay, she pointed at him. The Maede signalled the captain to come
and whispered in his ear; he was without a doubt pleased with the
answer he got, as he broadly smiled and approached the young elf, who
was keeping his head down. Holding his chin, he made him lift up his
face, which he examined with mocking eyes. 'Thus you are my new
acquisition, the gifted with whom my respected wife was so kind to
presented me... Good, good... I heard that Nestro personally trained
you: let's see if he was efficient or kept too many tricks to
himself... Face each other for our amusement; no armours, just a
couple of solid honest-looking steel swords. Give us a nice show.'
The
Maede made himself comfortable to watch the fight while Caradhar and
Nestro got themselves ready, removing their armours, just keeping
their leather trousers and boots. They chose weapons and tested their
balance; the veteran elf's nervous gaze moved from his pupil to his
revered mistress, Dame Corail, a detail that didn't pass unnoticed by
Lord Killien. Licking his suddenly dry lips, Nestro nodded to the
younger elf and they took up positions.
They
started crossing swords with caution, measuring each other's mettle
and keeping the distance. Yet it was difficult for Caradhar to
suppress his frustration: his mentor, much more experienced, knew his
abilities and limitations very well. He would be beaten in no time,
and the perspective of starting his career in the House with a defeat
did not attract him.
But
then he realised that Nestro wasn't putting all his heart into the
combat. Whatever the reason might be, his mother's influence or his
companion's own initiative, Caradhar decided to take advantage; after
all, he said to himself, it was just an exhibition. He increased the
intensity of his attacks, venturing a couple of two-handed blows that
grazed the older elf's skin, who was fighting defensively. Since the
boy understood his skills were not enough to disarm his opponent
using conventional methods, he tried to use strength and speed, and
an unexpected manoeuvre; making the sword spin around him with all
his power, he dealt a heavy blow to the weapons master's blade,
making him lose part of his grip. Then he quickly swung his weapon in
the opposite direction, striking near his adversary's hilt, who
dropped his sword and stumbled, falling on his knee. Caradhar pointed
his sword at Nestro's neck; both elves turned their heads to their
Lord.
With
a twisted smirk, Killien glanced at his spouse, stood up and walked
towards the fighters.
'Nice
scene, my young gifted; as for you, Nestro, what a disappointment...
Kneeling in front of an inexperienced kid. I'm not even going to
bother to ask if you did it on purpose or you lost your
master-stroke. One way or another, you are no longer useful for me,
so, boy,' he continued, turning to Caradhar, 'show me a token of your
obedience: kill him.'
For
a moment, the winner looked at his mother, whose knuckles had turned
white due to her clenched fists, slowly closing her eyes in a gesture
of resignation. Then he looked down at Nestro, at his hand grabbing
his ankle. The elf had slowly closed his eyes, with resigned
hopelessness; when he opened them again, he fixed them on the young
one. They said many things; they told a world of feelings; but the
gifted was unable to read them. He hesitated.
'Didn't...
you...hear me?'
The
repressed anger contained in the Maede's voice shook Caradhar. His
mind worked fast: he understood that, whatever the secret that
granted Lord Killien domain over wills might be, it didn't affect
him; but also that he couldn't afford to be discovered. With a quick
movement of his sword he cut off Nestro's neck; drowning in his own
blood, he released his companion and died. His murderer, down on his
knee, laid out his weapon between him and the Maede and bowed his
head.
Nobody
else heard the ruler of House Elore'il, when he turned to his wife
and said, with a soft, cruel voice:
'You
should know I have ears everywhere, my
dear.
I won't tolerate anyone who isn't one hundred percent loyal to me in
the House. Anyone.'
***
Still
the sound of rain; across Caradhar's mind, the parade of silent
pictures continued: the oath... The new shiny armour... Blood, and
servants discreetly removing the corpse... Looks shying away from
him, while his comrades left to enjoy a night of wine and celebration
and he shut himself away in his room... The young elf absently lifted
a hand and discovered a small red spot on its back: Nestro's blood.
Outside,
the storm had become stronger. Caradhar wondered what he should be
feeling in that moment; he focused his energy on his chest, almost
wishing to feel pressure, heat, pain.
Nothing.
Lightning
crossed the sky, and a sparkle of light reflected in his red eyes.
For a small moment, they appeared to be alive.
OK so I know that your first language isn't English, but you already caught my attention with your stories. and I must say that this is my first BL NOVEL, I've read many mangas but that's it. Any ways moving on, I just have to say that I LOVE your story so far. It's dark, the characters don't jump around in their personality, there are great visual descriptions and an unexpected twist with top and bottom positions (regarding the BL). Also the main characters actually act like men and don't lose their masculinity unlike many of the BL I've read so far. To top it all off there is magic and fantasy involved- my favorite genre.
ResponderEliminarHello, SoullessinDeath! I think it's bad luck for you that you picked something written by someone who isn't native English as your first BL story *smiles*, but at the same time, I am very happy and flattered it was mine! Yes, for some reason everything I've posted so far has fantasy/supernatural elements and drama, so if you like those genres, then we have similar tastes. And, what can I say? I really like strong characters and think pre-assigned roles aren't my cup of tea...
EliminarDon't hesitate to criticise whatever deserves it, your opinion is really appreciated; and of course, I hope the story manages to entertain you, even if just a bit!
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!